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She traded in kisses for
Shakespearean rhymes.
With inky lips
and quill for a tongue,
she speaks her mind.
She's made of content not
suitable for innocent eyes.
Like that one book
lurking between
the Classics on the
top shelf of a used
bookstore.
The one with the yellowed
creases,
That has been read
a few too many times.
NaPoWriMo #10
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Kiuesque Featured By Owner May 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I like... I like muchly...
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Banshee-X Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Student Writer
I'm glad! :)
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RhyeChan Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2011
love this!
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Banshee-X Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks! :)
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mrpineapple3 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is great :D
word-perfect :)
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Banshee-X Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you!! :)
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kikin91 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011
You reminded me the first book I've read that I loved to read every time, well its most likely the collection of stories of Sherlock Holmes, hehe...
I love your writing XD
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Banshee-X Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011  Student Writer
I love Sherlock Holmes! :heart:
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Thein1 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011
Dang! I really like this! Oh sweet!! You're doing NaPoWriMo too? :D Awesome. I'm personally not much a fan of love poems, but this one is incredibly original and it sticks out to me. I seriously like the "quill for a tongue" and the "Shakespearean rhymes," That was awesome. Well done sir.
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Banshee-X Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011  Student Writer
Yeah, I am doing NaPoWriMo, but I'm two days behind everyone else because the whole thing completely slipped my mind before someone reminded me. Thank you for the comment, I am glad you liked my work choices. :)
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Thein1 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011
Awesome. Well, no worries! You can catch right back up haha. I'm one ahead of the entire process. There was a night that I had TWO MINUTES to write a poem because I forgot, and I ended up making a very very minimalist poem, but nonetheless, it was a poem! :)
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TheLunaLily Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:)
I love those first two lines <3
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Banshee-X Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you! :)
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TheLunaLily Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :)
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DoktorSpankenstein Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011
Nice little twist, we all want to know the title now. ;)
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Banshee-X Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Student Writer
The title, hmm? lol
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DoktorSpankenstein Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011
A magnificent tease if there ever was one. :)
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Banshee-X Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Student Writer
So I've been told. ;)
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SabakunoPA Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is so wonderful O_o
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Banshee-X Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Student Writer
Glad you think so, hon! :)
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SabakunoPA Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It kinda makes me think, yer know?
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Banshee-X Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Student Writer
How so? :)
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SabakunoPA Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When I was a kid, I read alot of books and now I don't.
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Banshee-X Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Student Writer
I love reading books. You should read more. ;)
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SabakunoPA Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll sure try :3 I'm gonna read... Humm... ET XD Naaah'... Maybe... Some romantic gay suff.
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Banshee-X Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Student Writer
I've got lots of that. XD
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bladesafaridor Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011
thanks for reminding me of all the good old books on my shelf. (>.<)

great job altogether (^_^)
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Banshee-X Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Student Writer
Oh, you're welcome! :)
thanks so much for the comment!
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bladesafaridor Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011
of course, i would try the critique to help too, but I am honestly not good in that department (-_-')
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Banshee-X Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Student Writer
Don't feel bad, because I'm not either. lol
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bladesafaridor Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011
*(^o^)*
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Absolutely love this! :heart:
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Banshee-X Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you! :)
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure!
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